Revision Coaching

for Fantasy, Sci-Fi & Romance Writers

Your first draft is done. Now what?

Your first draft is done. Now what?

How Revision Coaching Works

Full Manuscript Read & Revision Plan

Before your first term, I read your full draft and write a revision plan including: what's working, what isn't, and where to start. Every week of coaching is built from this plan.

Your term begins

Each term is 12 weeks of coaching across 14 calendar weeks, including 2 editor weeks with no submissions or calls. At kickoff, we set your week plan, a mix of worksheet weeks and scene weeks.

Weekly Developmental Feedback on Your Pages

On scene weeks, you submit up to 3,000 words of your revised manuscript. Feedback is returned to you 4 business days later.

Coaching Calls With Your Developmental Editor

We meet on a regular schedule to work through the bigger craft questions your pages raise.

Renew or wrap up

At the end of each term, you choose whether to continue. Many novels take a few terms to revise fully, and each renewal picks up where the last one left off.

Revision Coaching Packages & Pricing

Revision Coaching Standard

PRICE: $300 per month

Revision Coaching Intensive

  • Up to 3,000 words per scene week

  • Full inline comments with scene structure breakdowns

  • A video walkthrough of about 10 minutes for every submission

  • One 60-minute call every two weeks (6 per term)

  • Open Inbox: email craft questions between calls

  • Up to 3,000 words per scene week

  • Written feedback with 1 to 2 comments per page

  • One 60-minute call per month (3 per term)

  • Email for scheduling and quick clarification on your feedback